Dove
season begins in the late spring when the weather grows warm and the air holds
a sweet smell and promise. We were energetic
and drove off with a box of thirty Keystone Lights and a pair of twelve gauge
shotguns, out to the country where their cousins live.
Down a few miles of dirt road we
met the kid and all his extended family. The kid was in his mid twenties, was
burnt tan, and wore only tattered jeans with holes in the knees and
boots. Across his back in archaic font was tattooed “Dirty South”.
At first we would stand
around and drink, taking aim at doves sitting on the telephone wires that were
the only markers across the flat landscape of neatly plowed spring
farms. Enough had been drunk for the men to flex their trigger fingers,
talking trash and celebrating their prowess whenever a dove would spin off of a
wire or clasp their wings shut mid flight and dive headlong into the
ground.
As the small mountain of empty
silver cans was growing, so did my delusions of talent. But then I would shoot
and nothing happened so my confidence quickly ebbed and I went out back to
practice in solitude. A bird sat on a bush twenty yards away. I
took aim and the gun and the bird jolted instantaneously and I walked over with
renewed belief in my competence, but the kid had been watching and called
to me “That ain’t no dove, man. That’s a mockingbird.” I stood over it and the bird looked back
darkly at me wings open bearing its soft underside. I thought to myself I
would never shoot a mockingbird again.
“Lets get in the car and find some
more,” he called as he jammed his thumb under the ribs of a limp dove and tore
out the two breasts to keep for the grill. Four of us jumped into the car
and swerved down the dirt roads, guns akimbo out every window taking aim at
anything that quietly sat on the wires overhead. One was felled and
floated down to the ground and it struggled as it flapped in circles like one
wing was nailed to the dirt. The kid skipped out of the car, stepped on
the crippled wing and pulled the head of with a small spurt of blood like a
shook can of coke. He tossed the head into the bushes and threw the rest in the
back of the car.
We took our downy pile of dead
birds back to the house stood around the hill of empty cans, drinking
quicker. The kid started playing on an old motorcycle, trying to skid
circles in the grass but he lost control and the bike fell down and he bruised
and burned his leg underneath. His father’s girlfriend with a sunken chin
laughed and made a remark that maybe only he heard.
As quickly as he fell he leaped
up. We all heard the shuck of the loaded
twelve-gauge but did not anticipate it to be leveled at her mouth from a foot
away. His eyes were dark with redness and rage and his neck flared and
his hands trembled. He told her that she was inbred and swore to God that he
would kill her. The old men lowered their beers and quietly and
shamefully called the name of their own kin. Moments passed filled with
what everyone did not want to happen and then he turned the gun away and his father
glowered.
The kid walked
off and then pulled me aside and asked for a ride home. As
we drove miles back to his trailer I wanted to speak with him about what
he did, but he only spoke about the things he swore to do if it happened again.
If it actually counted, my vote would go here...
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ReplyDeletei don't know if i can vote on this, but i like it.
ReplyDeleteToo bad it's late because its one of the best stories I've read this year. Next time just wait a day and post it for the following week! Not a vote.
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